After watching the first draft of our opening sequence we decided to slightly change the plot of our original story.The story we were originally trying to tell just required to much exposition.We realised during the editing that we had enough material to fashion a different narrative, where a story was being hinted at or suggested, rather obviously stated. We realised that we could edit the material together in a way that intrigued the audience and hooked them in without needing to give too much away.
Instead of the original theme of revenge we change the plot so that we have a main protagonist who has several recurring flashbacks of watching his friends set someone on fire. He wants to move away from this life as he feels guilty about things he has done in his past.
- Gracia
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